This is very well done, and unique.
You know, I'm white, and actually I dress pretty much like a goth/biker, and I hate rap. But this, this isn't the rap I hear about a dog with his bitches and how hes toatin' all these gun and drugs and shit. This has a story, a moral.
This reaches me in a way not a lot of other things can. It teaches how life goes on, even after a death of someone, even if someone knew them or not. And in the end, we all die, we don't always get breaks and things aren't that easy. People have a lack of caring, and dont want to handle the problems of others, and are caught up in their own woe. You defiantly have quite the masterpiece here. It hit me hard, a Lil' too close to home in a way...
either way, about the music, I really like the beats going on, and the echo voice going on in the background. I like the repetitive keyboard sound, and the almost atmospheric/white noise sound at 1:37 or so. Very well done, you have a 10/10 and a 5/5 from me, me friend.
~NScorn~